IF YOUR SCREENPLAY IS NOT SELLING– I’LL TELL YOU WHY– THEN SHOW YOU HOW TO FIX IT!
Precise script analysis
Clear & concise explanations of how to fix script problems
Touch-ups or complete script rewrites
Compelling Log Lines
COMEDY – making your funny script funnier
- punching up witty dialog
- creating clever sight gags
- writing slapstick action scenes
- developing zany characters
(25 years experience as a teacher, writer and editor of comedy)
DRAMA – strengthening the story arc
- structuring the three acts
- action-packed scene construction
- developing interesting characters
- writing realistic dialog
- powerful endings
